Rain Like Shards of Glass

p11 - castle rock 1

Tears blow angrily
Against drunken Castle Rock
Shaken but not stirred

or

The cork busted loose
Drenching steady Castle Rock
Like New Year’s Champagne

or (still not sold)

Rain like shards of glass
Pierced the crust of Castle Rock
All ran for cover

Which one do you like the best or none? I was searching and searching and searching for inspiration. Won’t you join us in today’s Poetry challenge through the Daily Post? Β Today, it’s Water in the form of a Haiku with the device of a Simile.

Author: Carol Blake

Writer, Recovering Coffee Addict, Lover of Mountains. Lives to shrink the planet, one story and connection at a time.

0 thoughts on “Rain Like Shards of Glass”

  1. “Rain like shards of glass
    Pierced the crust of Castle Rock
    All ran for cover.”

    This one is my favorite. I can see the pictures your words paint, and it blesses me..

    Love,
    Cheryl

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